A great mistake
Oh what a great mistake
To make for goodness sake
We could not foresee
The [apostrophe] [catastrophe]
In moot fruits of the snakeAlan Grace
28 August 2018
Aug 27 Mistake Mistake Mistake Poetry Maybe change last three lines in your poem Geraldine to:
but from the
fruits temptation
By biting those.What do you think?
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Jan 5 Tempted Tempted Tempted Poetry
From trying to figure how he always knows, it started with the snake, and the embarrassment from which Adam and Eve arose. The defilement isn't his control but from his temptation bitten by those.
