Awkward walk

Awkward walk

Please stop the pain I beg
I’ve a very sore leg
Now I’ve had my x-rays
Next see what doctor says
The strain’s a powder keg

Alan Grace
22 May 2018

Another version:

Awkward walk

Pray stop the pain I beg
May I swap my sore leg
Now I’ve got main x-rays
Next gain what doctor says
The strain’s shock powder keg

Alan Grace
22 May 2018

Which version do you prefer? Or a combination of the two versions?

Daily prompt: Awkward

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